THE REVENGE

THE REVENGE

In 1493, one year after Columbus discovered America, Spanish and the Natives were met, there was a good relationship between them, and they created families among them, they had children, business...but there was a problem, a baby of a family, didn’t born as he should , he was born with a very rare syndrome, an aggressive syndrome.

Because of this, Colombus decided train he because he could be a very good option to win wars. Years passed and he became the best fighter of the are, but one day the boy woke up and he found the body of his father died. Then he became very aggressive and no one could stopped him.

As soon as he realised that his father was killed, he felt extremely angry and neurotic. He wanted the killer killed, so he started to sharpen his spear. But as soon as his logic started to work, he started to think who murdered his father. He didn’t know if his father had life-long enemies waiting for revenge, or may had an unresolved problem with somebody. So he started to investigating.

Erkilio found some strange documents in his father’s office, and in one of these papers he found the name “Alvaro Gomis” and one picture of him and the location. Erkilio was very angry with his father's assassin, he decided to travel to París in one ships with the mission to kill Alvaro Gomis. He travelled from America to Europe in ship in two months. When he arrived he took his weapons and he went to the residence of his victim Alvaro Gomis.

Erkilio broke a window carefully and he went in the residence of Alvaro Gomis without doing any noises. He looked in all the residence but nothing, all the rooms were empty no one was at residence. To thought a plan he sat in a chair in front of the principal door of the residence, and just in case he took his gun out and he put it in the table. Suddenly, he heard a noise out of the house and he took the gun, pointing with it to the door. A man appeared, he closed the door, and when he turned he saw to Erkilio sat in the chair and he looked surprised.

-You don’t recognize me? People say me that I take after my father.-Erkilio said.
-No no no no …. it couldn’t be... - Alvaro scared.
-Yes.
-(PUM!) he shouted and Alvaro fall down.

   

Silence reigned, there was no one in the streets, he save the gun in the jacket and he started walking to the ship .

-Where are you going? - a voice asked from behind he.


He returned and he saw a woman with a gun, she was the daughter of Alvaro, Celia.

- Why are you with a gun?
- Think a little bit, I am at the toilet when you came into our residence.
Erkilio was surprised.
- Why are you asking me that? -asked.
- Shut up - and she aimed at him with the gun.
- Please don’t, don’t do it.
- Late - and she shot with the gun.

 

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This is a work in which we had to make six different  stories, and each of the group had to continue the paragraph of the last worker, in this way, we have gotten six writers in each story, with the collaboration of the group.

If you want to see my original work with my friends' contributions click here,

And tese are my workfriends stories:
Gorka Vildarraz
Imanol Amundarain
Ander Congil
Irati Salaberria
Irene Arana
Julen Artano